13/2/15 editing session

More progress being made: we broke up the bridge scene with flash-forwards of the next scene. This gives the impression that our actor is thinking about what she is going to do. The shots are obscure, sun-drenched and dreamy, keeping the viewers waiting to find out what they are.

Furthermore, we added a few nature shots before the hoop scene so as to act as a reminder that the significant theme is the natural world. Again, it helps to break up the action and focus on the actor.

Lastly, my client agreed that the video is lacking in some places where the nature theme comes in, so I have decided to do another shoot when I can. The things I need to shoot better footage for are:

• Ripples in water, in river
• The sunsetting
• More plants/foliage closer up

Total hours: 2.5 hours